{"product_id":"2940000789209","title":"Ravished: An Office FemDom Story","description":"\u003cp\u003eWimpy businessman, Dean, has his office taken over by a ranting brat new hire, Shanna, who disrupts the entire office with her entitled behavior.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eThings are so bad Dean no longer lets his wife of 20 years, Gina, drop in at the office.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eGina gets suspicious and investigates and gets ravished by the young Shanna after she lies to Gina about having an affair with Dean.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eGina throws Dean out and takes up a lesbian relationship with the young vixen.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eShanna wins!\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eOr not?\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eYou'll have read to find out.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eoOOooOOo\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eThe original premise was twofold.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eOne was to write a story entirely in dialogue without attribution. This seemed to have put readers off. Some could not follow the thread. Others found the grammatical errors and syntax errors especially off-putting.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eThis comes with the territory when writing dialogue. No one speaks grammatically correct in plain conversation, especially in a heated argument, and syntax is often the first and foremost casualty.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eI have cleaned that up to some extent in this version. Though I am not a big stickler for 'correct' grammar. People who are grammar-nazis should become English teachers and leave the writing to people that respect language as a fluid medium.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eThe second objective was to present a situation where a character is too good for his own good.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eDean owns the business but cannot bring himself to fire Shana even as she upsets the entire office.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eI have worked in office environments like this but I am not a writer that feels the need to have everything I write be 'believable' anyway. I just thought it fit with what I was trying to do here.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eThe conceit is that Shanna's destructive behavior might actually expose the problems Dean's 'good nature' conceal.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eShanna practically takes control of Dean's office then sexually takes control of his marriage but in the end she might leave them both stronger than she found them if only Dean has the strength to survive her machinations.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eI suppose I could have written a 'sweet and light' version along these lines but we don't always do sweet and light.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eThis is down and dirty. Some might say Porn-On-Paper. I don't agree but if you know you are a prude PLEASE don't read this.\u003c\/p\u003e\u003cp\u003eFor the rest of you grown-ups: I hope you enjoy it.\u003c\/p\u003e","brand":"transgressivesexfiction21plus","offers":[{"title":"Default Title","offer_id":47179826168048,"sku":"2940000789209","price":0.99,"currency_code":"USD","in_stock":true}],"thumbnail_url":"\/\/cdn.shopify.com\/s\/files\/1\/0737\/7593\/9824\/files\/2940000789209_p0.jpg?v=1763545924","url":"https:\/\/shop-qa.barnesandnoble.com\/products\/2940000789209","provider":"Barnes \u0026 Noble (DEV)","version":"1.0","type":"link"}