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Origins
Origins
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Origins is a 5,560 word short story.
This is the fourth ebook in Nicholas Tomihama's Story-a-Week project in which he writes a new original work of fiction or nonfiction in a week and publishes it on Amazon.com
Unable to die and constantly in a struggle with the untamed wild, Edam searches for his purpose in the world. As the very first man he is led by a divine hand and trial to become father, husband, leader and god in his countless years.
From the Author:
This is a product of the stress of moving. The story is disjointed, some parts separated by days and others by hundreds of years of elapsed time. The story itself is loosely based upon an interpretation of the Bible mixed with some speculation on my part. What if man has been around since the very beginning? What if he was one of the first beings to be created?
If there was only one man and one woman, both immortal and with no children for a few million years, would there be any trace of them? Would there be any record of two lone individuals trying to make it in a world ruled by terrible beasts? Would their appearance as a sizable population millions of years later be due to their new evolutionary appearance or simply because they figured out how to survive?
The story is short and has lots of holes to be filled, but it is a quick and interesting read. The use of commas is atrocious, but lends more to the flow of the story and less to proper usage.
This is the fourth ebook in Nicholas Tomihama's Story-a-Week project in which he writes a new original work of fiction or nonfiction in a week and publishes it on Amazon.com
Unable to die and constantly in a struggle with the untamed wild, Edam searches for his purpose in the world. As the very first man he is led by a divine hand and trial to become father, husband, leader and god in his countless years.
From the Author:
This is a product of the stress of moving. The story is disjointed, some parts separated by days and others by hundreds of years of elapsed time. The story itself is loosely based upon an interpretation of the Bible mixed with some speculation on my part. What if man has been around since the very beginning? What if he was one of the first beings to be created?
If there was only one man and one woman, both immortal and with no children for a few million years, would there be any trace of them? Would there be any record of two lone individuals trying to make it in a world ruled by terrible beasts? Would their appearance as a sizable population millions of years later be due to their new evolutionary appearance or simply because they figured out how to survive?
The story is short and has lots of holes to be filled, but it is a quick and interesting read. The use of commas is atrocious, but lends more to the flow of the story and less to proper usage.
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