To Kill Again: Episode Eight

This is the eighth episode of a twelve part series that I've written. I just thought I'd put a few episodes/chapters/parts 'out there' to see if it garners any interest from readers after it went no where in Hollywood; my manager taking it out just after ABC picked up their new show, 'Time After Time' :( It's set out in screenplay format, which personally I find an easier and much faster read than conventional books, although I appreciate it's not to everyone's taste. If you do read it and like it, PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE leave a short review and/or share with others on Facebook, Twitter, etc.. C'mon, it's not a lot to ask for a free read, surely?